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About three months ago, a Reddit user posed a challenge to come up with the creepiest story possible with just two sentences. Someone using the awkward handle "JustAnotherMuffledVo" did just
that. His or her story was scary as all hell and went viral. I'm not sure why it works for others, but for me and my wife, it probably resonated with us as parents. The next decision the parent has to make in this story is crucial. It's also impossible. I'm getting the willies just thinking about it.
This is the best piece of flash fiction I've read in a long, long time. I hope the strange user name doesn't deter people from taking it seriously, because this deserves to be anthologized. A flash classic in the making.
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Updated January 27, 2015: Now the author's actual name has been attached, Juan J. Ruiz
7 comments:
That is amazingly creepy!
Nicola: And in so few words.
That is a crazy story. Definitely resonates with me as a parent.
Brilliant! And now that nice picture of a bed on your post is the scariest picture ever! *shudder*!
Oh wow, that is spot on! How fiendishly clever.
Aww you think my user name handle is awkward. It was supposed to be witty something about being just another small voice in the vastness of comments that exist on reddit. Never thought anything I'd write would get that much attention though.
Juan: Probably didn't help that "Voice" got cut off at the end. In any case, glad to hear from you. Any follow up stories (please no sequel!) that we should know about?
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